Entry #7 IN MY COUNTRY..

 Tourists attraction in Argentina

     In my country, each location offers a range of alternatives for visitors to enjoy in close contact with nature, its challenges and mysteries,surrounded by different landscapes, so it is possible to spend the most fascinating holidays according to your own interests.An ideal place for those who enjoy the adventure, extreme sports and cold weather is the South of Argentina, provinces such as Chubut, Rio Negro and Neuquén, offer an intensive but attractive experience. Trekking, mountain-biking, rafting and canoeing are some of the favorite sports that  make visitors fell like explorers. Moreover, for those people interested in hot weather and nature, the province of Misiones is the best choice, where you can appreciate the fabulous waterfalls, established as Natural Heritage Site and also the regional flora and fauna. Finally, one place especially worth visiting by families is the province of Entre Rios. There is possible to enjoy a relaxing recess with a beautiful sightseeing and a warm climate. The most special place to share with your relatives is the traditional and popular hot spring resort. In addition, you can take pleasure in Spas and fishing in the Parana River.Concluding, Argentina´s variety of landscapes bring you the possibility to choose, according to your likes and preferences, the most suitable place to spend an unforgettable holidays.

 
 (my version)

  Tourists attraction in Argentina

   In Argentina, there is a wide range of places to visit during the holiday season according to people´s preferences. An ideal place for those who enjoy the adventure, extreme sports and cold weather is the South of Argentina, provinces such as Chubut, Rio Negro and Neuquén, offer an intensive but attractive experience. Trekking, mountain-biking, rafting and canoeing are some of the favorite sports that  make visitors fell like explorers. Moreover, for those people interested in hot weather and nature, the province of Misiones is the best choice, where you can appreciate the fabulous waterfalls, established as Natural Heritage Site and also the regional flora and fauna. Finally, one place especially worth visiting by families is the province of Entre Rios. There is possible to enjoy a relaxing recess with a beautiful sightseeing and a warm climate. The most special place to share with your relatives is the traditional and popular hot spring resort. In addition, you can take pleasure in Spas and fishing in the Parana River.This brief summary mentions some alternatives for people with different predilections when choosing where to spend their free time.

 (my mate’s version)

  Metacognitive analysis

Analysing both paragraphs I notice that my mate`s topic sentence and conclusion reflect the main purpose of my writing. However, they are short comparing them to the development of the supported ideas.  In addition, the topic sentence does not explain in details what the paragraphs is going to be about.  When was my turn to write, I realized that it was a difficult task to solve, because the two essential elements were missing.